07-29-2015, 02:31 AM
As everyone seems to think that this was written while I was 80% asleep, I'd like to make a small correction and say the original draft of this was written so. This version is actually the cleaned up, 100%-awake-edited version. But as everyone still thinks this makes no sense whatsoever, the only thing I can say is that this will be undergoing an even more thorough revision quite soon. Thanks to everyone who's read & critiqued! Much appreciated.
like you've been shot (bang bang bang)

