07-28-2015, 01:02 AM
Fun read, thanks for posting.
A couple of small meterbumps to my read, but if i understood correctly the last line was a comment to Keith not part of the poem and this was written in 1960 and posted more to share with Kieth rather than to recieve crit. (If it is not too rude to ask - what age did you start writing poetry?)
A couple of small meterbumps to my read, but if i understood correctly the last line was a comment to Keith not part of the poem and this was written in 1960 and posted more to share with Kieth rather than to recieve crit. (If it is not too rude to ask - what age did you start writing poetry?)