Glide Comes Before The Fall (title change, edit #1)
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Thanks so much, AJ, very helpful. Maybe I can find a subtle circus title to ease the confusion of the first few lines. I liked confetti and was unsure about mass, trying to get away without using masses but I didn't realize confetti has gone the way of tickertape. Maybe shredded paper, thanks for the headsup, I'll think on it.

I'll see what I can do with the one small boy line and the magic spell. Your time and comments are much appreciated. Smile
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To clarify meant the hats dated it not the confettiĀ  (which i also quite like)...think hat wearing has passed into olden times images.
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