07-25-2015, 02:53 PM
Real thoughtful and good criticisms of this poem, methinks. Take them to heart if you so desire.
You can't hate me more than I hate myself. I win.
"When the spirit of justice eloped on the wings
Of a quivering vibrato's bittersweet sting."
"When the spirit of justice eloped on the wings
Of a quivering vibrato's bittersweet sting."