07-25-2015, 10:29 AM
hello again wj-
Reflecting upon S. 2, I begin t think that the "snare" is a tricky instrument to convey the sizzling/pattering sound of rain on a metal roof: that's why I suggested the word "beat".
The trick will be to pair the snare's sound within the context of a children's book (as a suggestion):
" backing the tubby tubas with a steady roll."
Also- "Rain fell" should be "rain falls", as falling rain makes the sound, not rain that fell.
Reflecting upon S. 2, I begin t think that the "snare" is a tricky instrument to convey the sizzling/pattering sound of rain on a metal roof: that's why I suggested the word "beat".
The trick will be to pair the snare's sound within the context of a children's book (as a suggestion):
" backing the tubby tubas with a steady roll."
Also- "Rain fell" should be "rain falls", as falling rain makes the sound, not rain that fell.