the night lanterns

[cjchaffin]

thanks crow, but you're way overthinking it. this is a pretty simple, straightforward premise about death and commonality and realization.

i acknowledge and agree that this is lacking in poetics and leaning more towards prose; i'll address that in the edit.

i'm going to skim through your comments (which are a bit much for mild critique, but i get what you're trying to do and i do appreciate that) and try to pick out some points. thanks for the in-depth analysis.