07-22-2015, 08:38 AM
I respectfully disagree with the people who said the caps isn't needed. It gives the words more meaning and it becomes more of something to refer to rather than just another one. For example, "Winter's bite" i picture a situation where winter's bite isn't just a generic term, it's that dreaded Winter's bite that people know and have heard about. That little extra depth with something as simple as a capital letter is just so effective. But don't over do it, not that you have.
As for the poem as a whole, for your first attempt bravo. It sounds over-positive but really, i did picture this mountain and the blistering cold. The ending was a breath of fresh air for me. Has been a while since i've seen that kind of style where you reveal who and what you are at the end and the magic of this is that it makes you read the poem again
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As for the poem as a whole, for your first attempt bravo. It sounds over-positive but really, i did picture this mountain and the blistering cold. The ending was a breath of fresh air for me. Has been a while since i've seen that kind of style where you reveal who and what you are at the end and the magic of this is that it makes you read the poem again
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