07-19-2015, 11:55 PM
To the left of katmandu
sat a man bereft one shoe,
was one sandal shod
so he said to God
"oh Lord this just won't do,
I've holed my sole
and my begging bowl
has up n then gone missing,
now it's my mishap
that I've trod in crap--
and I've got no pot
to piss in".
Hello; most of my pieces are humour based and as such not what you might call poetry, but heigh ho.
Feel free to add a little if you wish !! or, critique it.
Obi.
sat a man bereft one shoe,
was one sandal shod
so he said to God
"oh Lord this just won't do,
I've holed my sole
and my begging bowl
has up n then gone missing,
now it's my mishap
that I've trod in crap--
and I've got no pot
to piss in".
Hello; most of my pieces are humour based and as such not what you might call poetry, but heigh ho.
Feel free to add a little if you wish !! or, critique it.
Obi.