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07-18-2015, 04:03 AM
Thanks for reading guys. I get what you're saying about "loping" guys, I think I might change it to "lilting". This was written in Iambic pentameter (or at least, trying to be), so I'd like to keep that line length/format the way it is for now, but I can see how separating "flew away" could be nice.
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Three Strolls - by Wjames - 07-12-2015, 12:47 PM
RE: Three Strolls - by billy - 07-12-2015, 04:56 PM
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