07-17-2015, 09:32 PM
I love it, am I making myself clear? Actually, you had quite the knack for meter, however you got there. 
You show potential, young man.
If I was able to be embarrassed by my bad poetry I only have to go back two years to the villes I posted here having no idea that a set meter (what's that?) was part of the deal. But mere poems do not have that power, I found it pretty amusing when the sinkholes were pointed out, still do.
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