Tasting Notes

[kaijoy2]

I really like the length here, short and sweet, the concision gives the poem more weight due to its ephemerality in my opinion. I also like how isolated you made the word "complicated", it works as a bridge between the first and last stanzas adding nuance to both. I also think that with a poem of this length, your use of rhyme is spot on and even necessary. The placement of "miraculously" is interesting though I dont know how well it works, I dont think it adds much to the poem personally.