07-14-2015, 04:21 AM
Love the relatable diction and the tinder allusions ("swipe right" and all that). I also really enjoy the concept of the poem as a whole. I think the meter could be more consistent (since the first two lines have a cadence to them, though this isnt really continued) I think the lack of meter towards the end is highlighted by the fact that you continue to use rhyme. I think the AA BB rhyme scheme that you have going is interesting and that you could continue to experiment with how that scheme interacts with the meter that you're using. Sorry, if my comment wasn't as in depth as some others, I'm a novice myself.