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billy Offline

Are you alluding to me?

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07-12-2015, 04:56 PM (This post was last modified: 07-12-2015, 04:57 PM by billy.)

would [i loped along] sound better.
and would [and flew away] work better on it's own line in the text version.
a short poem with a lot of image

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Three Strolls - by Wjames - 07-12-2015, 12:47 PM

RE: Three Strolls - by billy - 07-12-2015, 04:56 PM

RE: Three Strolls - by Quixilated - 07-13-2015, 04:41 AM

RE: Three Strolls - by Wjames - 07-18-2015, 04:03 AM

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