Frogola
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Thanks flourescent, some really good feedback. The poem is supposed to be fantasy and quite tongue in cheek, the clue is in the title. Frogola does not exits, it is a mythical place I invented. It's basic black comedy for kids Smile

Will be doing a review based on your suggestions.
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Frogola - by zeichnicht - 07-11-2015, 07:16 AM
RE: Frogola - by fluorescent.43 - 07-11-2015, 12:37 PM
RE: Frogola - by zeichnicht - 07-11-2015, 09:28 PM
RE: Frogola - by fluorescent.43 - 07-11-2015, 09:31 PM
RE: Frogola - by zeichnicht - 07-11-2015, 09:50 PM
RE: Frogola - by billy - 07-12-2015, 09:09 AM
RE: Frogola - by zeichnicht - 07-12-2015, 09:17 AM
RE: Frogola - by billy - 07-12-2015, 05:05 PM
RE: Frogola - by tectak - 07-13-2015, 09:49 PM
RE: Frogola - by zeichnicht - 07-14-2015, 01:20 AM



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