First Poem
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This is my first real poem and I'm here to learn, so please, tear this one up, as much as it deserves, so that I can do better.
Thank you, all.


I sit atop a tall lonely mountain.
Cloudy mist, my only companion.
I look down on the people who live below.
I see every life end and begin.

I, too, was once a man.
Who once was lost along a winding trail.
I found peace in protecting and observing.
Despite Winters bite and storming hail.

I found that I could stop disaster.
Send help to those whom needed.
Alone I must stay on top this tall mountain.
But, my own woes, I always conceded.

My attention ever on those, whom I try to help.
I didn’t notice myself turning slowly to stone.
The elements would try to beat me.
But, I would stay, forever and alone.

My will is strong, my heart is true.
I try to give my luck to all those below.
Though, it costs me in ways indescribable.
I make it up in more ways than one could know.

I am the Gentle Giant, who sits on the mountain.
I am the Gentleman Beast, who watches over all that I can.
I am the lonely Figure of Stone.
Whom all have forgotten was once a Man
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Messages In This Thread
First Poem - by Vastile - 07-10-2015, 05:28 AM
RE: First Poem - by Mark A Becker - 07-10-2015, 07:18 AM
RE: First Poem - by Animal Riots Activist - 07-10-2015, 03:29 PM
RE: First Poem - by TheOnlyRedSmurf - 07-10-2015, 04:05 PM
RE: First Poem - by billy - 07-11-2015, 03:26 PM
RE: First Poem - by i.might.be.a.bit.sad - 07-14-2015, 12:13 PM
RE: First Poem - by yilmazp90 - 07-22-2015, 08:38 AM
RE: First Poem - by azure - 07-25-2015, 03:40 PM
RE: First Poem - by kakashi1090 - 08-09-2015, 02:20 AM



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