07-09-2015, 08:34 PM
(06-18-2015, 11:04 PM)Mr. Creosote Wrote: Their Thoughtsthose are the only three alterations I did in my head when I read it. I do like the ideas in the poem, not 100% sure on the meter though.I would say I love the last two lines as they are, but both start with "they" not sure of a replacement to use.
My thoughts belong to others
I own only a subscription have instead of own?
My head reproduces the past
I whisper footnotes after I speak footnotes whispered?
The great men of the past speak through me
I try to hide from them why do I try to hide from them?
They are leather bound black and white ghosts
They haunt my writing
I'm slightly mad and completely obsessed with language
Please forgive my spelling and punctuation
Please forgive my spelling and punctuation

