07-09-2015, 06:03 PM
It is quite an interesting idea.
We're all amalgamations of the past, the longest game of telephone from the very start.
Now, I've not the experience to give you critique based on the technical aspect of writing, but I can give you my opinion on the ideas expressed in such writings. The idea is a good one, though could possibly have been elaborated upon. Though, true, we are all that came before us, we are also our own interpretation of these events. We choose what part of the past we hear and which parts we give credence. In my opinion, it might have been nice to mention the other side of the idea, that man, though tied to where he came, also wills newness throughout his own works.
To be Original is to be Human, even when using a base, built upon the ages.
Again, my critiques are mostly just conjecture, philosophy, and opinion, but it's all I have to offer, really.
We're all amalgamations of the past, the longest game of telephone from the very start.
Now, I've not the experience to give you critique based on the technical aspect of writing, but I can give you my opinion on the ideas expressed in such writings. The idea is a good one, though could possibly have been elaborated upon. Though, true, we are all that came before us, we are also our own interpretation of these events. We choose what part of the past we hear and which parts we give credence. In my opinion, it might have been nice to mention the other side of the idea, that man, though tied to where he came, also wills newness throughout his own works.
To be Original is to be Human, even when using a base, built upon the ages.
Again, my critiques are mostly just conjecture, philosophy, and opinion, but it's all I have to offer, really.