Skin is like paper, revised
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thanks for those two inputs. the poem is about self harm, the ritual and repetition as well as the secret nature of the act.
people who self harm or self injure 'write' on their skin

I will work more on the metaphor for the next re-write. it will be some time before i get back here, but thank you again.
I'm slightly mad and completely obsessed with language

Please forgive my spelling and punctuationBeg
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Skin is like paper, revised - by TheOnlyRedSmurf - 07-04-2015, 07:30 PM
RE: Skin is like paper, 1st serious poem - by TheOnlyRedSmurf - 07-07-2015, 01:32 PM
RE: Skin is like paper, revised - by Todd - 07-11-2015, 06:16 AM
RE: Skin is like paper, revised - by zeichnicht - 07-11-2015, 09:22 AM
RE: Skin is like paper, revised - by zeichnicht - 07-12-2015, 02:21 AM
RE: Skin is like paper, revised - by tectak - 07-27-2015, 06:27 AM



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