The Death Caps Grow

[tectak]

Your criticism doesn't help me in any way.
I apologized for posting in the wrong forum and answered your question. I don't understand how that warrants you calling my work in progress "self indulgent pretentious nonesense" when I was never rude to you to begin with.
How does your feedback help me in any way other than make you look like an asshole?
I'll take my works elsewhere.

Then punctuate to clarity and knock off the auto line cap on your "settings". It is no longer considered poetic and only adds to the confusion.  Hell, I am reading it and trying to fathom out what it all means...help me. Or don't and then tell me it isn't self-indulgent. Arabesque winds? Amanitas phalloides with seeds...in the ocean? Did I already say it was nonsense?
Best,
tectak