Last Weekend

[ellajam]

I made a lean-to
to escape from the rain;
then slept for awhile
while the sun did the same.

When I opened my eyes
I was bitten and wet;
at my feet stood a bear
baring teeth that dripped red.


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This was just me messing around trying to make something with repeated words (or I guess syllables) in different contexts that (hopefully) made some sense.

Hi, S1 is a lovely read, S2 not so much for me. Waking bitten and wet made me think mosquito, I think if I was awakened by a bear bite I would not notice I was wet.