07-05-2015, 04:15 PM
I like your attempt at technical precision. I like that you respect this as a poetic value. I see it in this poem.
Thematically speaking...why do people still believe all this shit? If you're not, at the very least, a deist by now, I'm sorry, but the world has passed you by. And I'm no longer going to appease your feelings and beliefs in any way. Too old for that.
Thematically speaking...why do people still believe all this shit? If you're not, at the very least, a deist by now, I'm sorry, but the world has passed you by. And I'm no longer going to appease your feelings and beliefs in any way. Too old for that.
You can't hate me more than I hate myself. I win.
"When the spirit of justice eloped on the wings
Of a quivering vibrato's bittersweet sting."
"When the spirit of justice eloped on the wings
Of a quivering vibrato's bittersweet sting."