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07-04-2015, 12:09 PM

I really like this one. There are some places where I *think* it could be smoothed out a tad, though I'm too many drinks into as to where now. But it moved me.

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< like leaves > - by rayheinrich - 06-27-2015, 07:01 AM

RE: < like leaves > - by Keith - 06-28-2015, 06:35 AM

RE: < like leaves > - by rayheinrich - 07-01-2015, 02:45 PM

RE: < like leaves > - by just mercedes - 07-01-2015, 03:12 PM

RE: < like leaves > - by tectak - 07-01-2015, 11:04 PM

RE: < like leaves > - by milo - 07-01-2015, 11:12 PM

RE: < like leaves > - by Mark A Becker - 07-02-2015, 12:21 AM

RE: < like leaves > - by NobodyNothing - 07-04-2015, 12:09 PM

RE: < like leaves > - by rayheinrich - 09-04-2015, 08:02 PM

RE: < like leaves > - by milo - 09-05-2015, 02:22 PM

RE: < like leaves > - by rayheinrich - 09-05-2015, 10:40 PM

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