Like a Dog (REV 4)
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Thanks Danny

I appreciate your comments and condolences, though it has been more than two decades since my sister, Linda, passed, and more than three since Buck, the dog.

There have been several more since, both people and pets, and to some degree, they all appear in this piece.

The poem is intended to show the contrast between how pets and people meet their respective ends.

That said, I am not at all satisfied with the ending to this one, and have since revised it (again).

Thanks again,
... Mark
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Messages In This Thread
Like a Dog (REV 4) - by Mark A Becker - 06-27-2015, 12:48 AM
RE: Done With Dogs - by QDeathstar - 06-27-2015, 05:11 AM
RE: Done With Dogs - by Mark A Becker - 06-27-2015, 07:20 AM
RE: Done With Dogs - by ellajam - 06-28-2015, 11:04 PM
RE: Done With Dogs - by milo - 06-29-2015, 01:06 AM
RE: Done With Dogs - by tectak - 06-30-2015, 02:25 AM
RE: Like a Dog (REV 2) - by danny_ - 07-02-2015, 12:30 PM
RE: Like a Dog (REV 3) - by Mark A Becker - 07-03-2015, 12:40 AM
RE: Like a Dog (REV 3) - by danny_ - 07-04-2015, 12:03 AM
RE: Like a Dog (REV 3) - by Mark A Becker - 07-04-2015, 01:33 AM



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