07-02-2015, 05:33 AM
Wow Tom,
I never thought I'd see such serious commentary on a limerick.
I do wonder what the "night, night" is about, because it reads like an unintentional repeat repeat.
I don't mind the slant rhymes at all, and I'm a fan of rhymes like "idea" and "cheer" or "horse" and "waltz".
Also unsure of "majoris" because it makes me think of a constellation. But, I do get the major key reference...
That's 'bout it..
... Mark
I never thought I'd see such serious commentary on a limerick.
I do wonder what the "night, night" is about, because it reads like an unintentional repeat repeat.
I don't mind the slant rhymes at all, and I'm a fan of rhymes like "idea" and "cheer" or "horse" and "waltz".
Also unsure of "majoris" because it makes me think of a constellation. But, I do get the major key reference...
That's 'bout it..
... Mark