From he who only farted
#14
(06-30-2015, 06:40 AM)tectak Wrote:  
(06-26-2015, 05:06 PM)Brownlie Wrote:  O muse I pray you fill my barren chest
so I may puff my torso up with wind
and pour a drooping poppy’s strain depressed
before the bloom with heavy head down pinned.
Let owl songs that guide a rusty knife let songs of owls that guide a rusty knife
towards suicide be new endowed in me to suicide be new endowed in me
so I may use a death to eek a life,
be ripe with a rich green and potpourri, 
and hang like a dead note on bathroom walls
that chokes out feces with a harsh perfume. faeces?
Like an unpapered sadness in the stall,
let me reign higher than the flushing spume.
I know there’s nothing divine in your light,
but do not suffer me  a tail end’s blight.
...but what the hell. Lovin' it.
Best,
tectak
Thanks for taking a look,

Owl might be  ow-ul or oul or something else, the second line you pointed out had too many syllables, and apparently feces has a different British spelling (faeces). Go figure. 
Reply


Messages In This Thread
From he who only farted - by Brownlie - 06-26-2015, 05:06 PM
RE: From he who only farted - by rayheinrich - 06-26-2015, 06:14 PM
RE: From he who only farted - by Brownlie - 06-27-2015, 01:29 AM
RE: From he who only farted - by rayheinrich - 06-27-2015, 01:58 AM
RE: From he who only farted - by Brownlie - 06-27-2015, 02:07 AM
RE: From he who only farted - by milo - 06-27-2015, 02:10 AM
RE: From he who only farted - by Brownlie - 06-27-2015, 02:27 AM
RE: From he who only farted - by rayheinrich - 06-27-2015, 02:54 AM
RE: From he who only farted - by ellajam - 06-28-2015, 10:30 PM
RE: From he who only farted - by Brownlie - 06-29-2015, 01:35 AM
RE: From he who only farted - by ellajam - 06-29-2015, 03:34 AM
RE: From he who only farted - by Brownlie - 06-29-2015, 11:14 AM
RE: From he who only farted - by tectak - 06-30-2015, 06:40 AM
RE: From he who only farted - by Brownlie - 06-30-2015, 10:24 AM
RE: From he who only farted - by rayheinrich - 07-01-2015, 01:37 AM
RE: From he who only farted - by Brownlie - 07-01-2015, 11:31 PM



Users browsing this thread: 1 Guest(s)
Do NOT follow this link or you will be banned from the site!