Like a Dog (REV 4)

[tectak]

I thought this forum was for poems that need serious help?

qdeath...serious crit. There is a difference. Mod

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Yes folks-
I certainly released this one to the hounds in its early stages (probably the way too early stages).  

I'll admit to releasing it too early, with the (flimsy) excuse of letting it be kicked around, as I'm having a hard time getting this one outta the yard and on its leash.

I guarantee that it'll wind up in a much shorter form.  It wouldn't surprise me if I whittle it down to a dozen or fewer short lines.

That said, it would not bother me in the slightest if this one slinks into the doghouse until I do so.  (It may take awhile for the REV, and it hopefully won't get bumped much before that).

Thanks!
... Mark

Hi mark,
Do it justice.
Good egg,
tectak