06-29-2015, 01:20 AM
Thank you.
Yes it is quite dark, but probably not in the way most would imagine. You're right about the pov . I'll see what I can do about the punctuation, I'm having a bit of trouble with that haha. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment!

Yes it is quite dark, but probably not in the way most would imagine. You're right about the pov . I'll see what I can do about the punctuation, I'm having a bit of trouble with that haha. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment!
I relish writing bad poems, if it means someday I'll write a good one.

