pray or prey
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Thank you.Smile
Yes it is quite dark, but probably not in the way most would imagine. You're right about the pov . I'll see what I can do about the punctuation, I'm having a bit of trouble with that haha. Thanks for taking the time to read and comment!
I relish writing bad poems, if it means someday I'll write a good one.
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pray or prey - by Merrikay - 06-27-2015, 03:07 PM
RE: pray or prey - by Keith - 06-28-2015, 06:09 AM
RE: pray or prey - by Merrikay - 06-29-2015, 01:20 AM
RE: pray or prey - by Mark A Becker - 07-01-2015, 07:40 AM
RE: pray or prey - by Merrikay - 07-08-2015, 03:36 AM
RE: pray or prey - by Mark A Becker - 07-08-2015, 04:07 AM



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