06-28-2015, 11:15 PM
I enjoyed this read, sad as it is. The simplicity of the rhyme served the view for me, glossing over the complexities.
The last line is a bitter kicker. Thanks for posting it.
The last line is a bitter kicker. Thanks for posting it.
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