Like a Dog (REV 4)
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Hey qd-
Thanks for taking a look and leaving some comments.

There is no intended meter, as this one just popped out... like a journal entry (with line breaks). The journal entry observation is quite right.

Ah yes, the dog as an atomic weapon. Sometimes it feels that way. Certainly, dog as biological weapon.

I write a few poems like this every now and again, which makes them ripe for slicing and dicing. But that's exactly what I'm looking for. This one, being brand new, may require a lot 'o cutting.

Or maybe I just run with it as a "shaggy dog" story (bad pun, sorry). But that would meaning adding, instead of subtracting...

Thanks again!
... Mark
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Like a Dog (REV 4) - by Mark A Becker - 06-27-2015, 12:48 AM
RE: Done With Dogs - by QDeathstar - 06-27-2015, 05:11 AM
RE: Done With Dogs - by Mark A Becker - 06-27-2015, 07:20 AM
RE: Done With Dogs - by ellajam - 06-28-2015, 11:04 PM
RE: Done With Dogs - by milo - 06-29-2015, 01:06 AM
RE: Done With Dogs - by tectak - 06-30-2015, 02:25 AM
RE: Like a Dog (REV 2) - by danny_ - 07-02-2015, 12:30 PM
RE: Like a Dog (REV 3) - by Mark A Becker - 07-03-2015, 12:40 AM
RE: Like a Dog (REV 3) - by danny_ - 07-04-2015, 12:03 AM
RE: Like a Dog (REV 3) - by Mark A Becker - 07-04-2015, 01:33 AM



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