short & thweet

[billy]

for me it's more sneryu but it's just my view. other's may not agree.

first line is nigh on perfect
not sure grace works on the second line.
the last line while great makes me see it as a senryu.
a suggestion would be something like

cools blues

though i see you stick to 575.

Hello whacky short form artists. My name is Mark Becker, and I'm new to this forum. I have a great affinity for short form poetry. With that brief intro, I offer the following haiku:


jay bird glissandos
sharp grace notes, staccato crows
cool blue sheet music