06-24-2015, 04:47 AM
Very cool Christopher.
I didn't know what a "narwhal" was until I looked it up. Normally I'd say that it's a lot to ask of a reader before he starts to read the poem, but since this is a short piece, it seemed appropriate.
Now that I know that they have tusks, I can easily envision the narwhal as a unicorn. A sea unicorn, in fact.
I think that the "punctuation art" is an interesting idea. It may be able to stand alone as the first poem that I'd ever read with a title, but no words. A concrete poem all its own.
The "s" sounds work well here.
Three short lines (+ the keystroke artwork), and I learned something.
Thanks,
... Mark
I didn't know what a "narwhal" was until I looked it up. Normally I'd say that it's a lot to ask of a reader before he starts to read the poem, but since this is a short piece, it seemed appropriate.
Now that I know that they have tusks, I can easily envision the narwhal as a unicorn. A sea unicorn, in fact.
I think that the "punctuation art" is an interesting idea. It may be able to stand alone as the first poem that I'd ever read with a title, but no words. A concrete poem all its own.
The "s" sounds work well here.
Three short lines (+ the keystroke artwork), and I learned something.
Thanks,
... Mark