06-24-2015, 04:19 AM
Thank you for the suggestion ellajam.
Replace versus erase is something I'll seek to do in order to maintain the form. And yes, you are correct, it does require more thinking. But then, it took a lot of work to form this "glass" and I'd rather figure out how to retain its transparency, than break it.
Form, to me, is as important in poetry as in playing music. If I were to suddenly blast into a brilliant, but off-key solo during a song, the only thing people would hear is off-key, and the band would be pissed off, as well.
Thanks again for the encouragement to stay true to my style.
... Mark
Replace versus erase is something I'll seek to do in order to maintain the form. And yes, you are correct, it does require more thinking. But then, it took a lot of work to form this "glass" and I'd rather figure out how to retain its transparency, than break it.
Form, to me, is as important in poetry as in playing music. If I were to suddenly blast into a brilliant, but off-key solo during a song, the only thing people would hear is off-key, and the band would be pissed off, as well.
Thanks again for the encouragement to stay true to my style.
... Mark