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[ChristopherSea]

Ha ha, I agree Ray. I have red poppies and their saucer-like shapes are
suggestive of UFOs. Moreover, their huge stamens and pistils
are about as alien as flowers parts come.

Don't you need a comma after garden to separate the statement from the question?
For example:

Droning above the honey dew,
giant honey bee?
No- wee hummingbird

See what you think. Cheers/Chris