Stiff Drink

Stiff Drink

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#12

06-23-2015, 05:30 AM

oops, I double posted a reply and accidentally deleted it along with my THANKS to Christopher.

Christopher: I really appreciate your ideas for tightening down this poem even further. THANKS!

TODD: all closer except for the title. Stiff drink is a metaphor for the gun.

I may have this one done now. (Or should I say, done for now?)

.... Mark

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Stiff Drink - by Mark A Becker - 06-22-2015, 10:37 PM

RE: Stiff Drink - by tectak - 06-23-2015, 12:52 AM

RE: Stiff Drink - by Mark A Becker - 06-23-2015, 02:11 AM

RE: Stiff Drink - by Todd - 06-23-2015, 03:25 AM

RE: Stiff Drink - by Mark A Becker - 06-23-2015, 04:32 AM

RE: Stiff Drink - by Todd - 06-23-2015, 05:01 AM

RE: Stiff Drink - by QDeathstar - 06-23-2015, 03:54 AM

RE: Stiff Drink - by cjchaffin - 06-23-2015, 04:49 AM

RE: Stiff Drink - by ChristopherSea - 06-23-2015, 04:55 AM

RE: Stiff Drink - by Mark A Becker - 06-23-2015, 04:59 AM

RE: Stiff Drink - by tectak - 06-23-2015, 07:25 AM

RE: Stiff Drink - by Mark A Becker - 06-23-2015, 08:05 AM

RE: Stiff Drink - by QDeathstar - 06-23-2015, 05:04 AM

RE: Stiff Drink - by Mark A Becker - 06-23-2015, 05:30 AM

RE: Stiff Drink - by Todd - 06-23-2015, 05:30 AM

RE: Stiff Drink - by Erthona - 06-23-2015, 08:30 AM

RE: Stiff Drink - by billy - 06-23-2015, 10:37 AM

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