06-22-2015, 11:33 PM
Yes, good poem, especially it's multiplicity.
Leave out the "-" altogether; the pivot point doesn't come at the end of either
the first or the second line, this haiku's pivot is the whole second line.
Leave out the "-" altogether; the pivot point doesn't come at the end of either
the first or the second line, this haiku's pivot is the whole second line.
all this useless beauty... but what the hell, why not?