06-22-2015, 11:33 PM
Yes, good poem, especially it's multiplicity.
Leave out the "-" altogether; the pivot point doesn't come at the end of either
the first or the second line, this haiku's pivot is the whole second line.
Leave out the "-" altogether; the pivot point doesn't come at the end of either
the first or the second line, this haiku's pivot is the whole second line.
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions