06-22-2015, 10:00 PM
Hey Billy-
Hopefully there will be a revision soon, as I read the other crits, and I think that there are some very useful suggestions. I especially like the ending with the lights being turned up. Of course, you'll need to retain the sonnet form, but I see it as very doable, and I am looking forward to the REV.
... Mark
Hopefully there will be a revision soon, as I read the other crits, and I think that there are some very useful suggestions. I especially like the ending with the lights being turned up. Of course, you'll need to retain the sonnet form, but I see it as very doable, and I am looking forward to the REV.
... Mark