Mammals

[hopefularahant]

First 8 lines are really good!  It kind of drops off after that for me, though unfortuantely the title keeps making me think of that song by the bloodhound gang.....shudders.... I dont know much about sonnets, but one or two of the lines seems slightly too long and kind of break the rythm, and your rhymes near the end, especially nose, seem kind of funny... Other than that i really do like this poem and the idea behind it a ton..