06-20-2015, 08:57 AM
(06-20-2015, 08:52 AM)Todd Wrote: I got the wheelchair with no problem. I also took flirting as a sign of youthfullness, but when coupled with ancient it seems to be more focused on age than on loss of mobility. I didn't get the sense he hated the tree.yes. I didn't really want hateful, more wistful so that is good. The focus on age shows that i definitely have a problem with "ancient"
Just adding to the feedback. it reads more whistful than despondent.

