06-19-2015, 10:26 AM
EEEK...I never thought about herpes. I definitely don't want that. That line will be reworked. Thanks Todd.
I wasn't familiar with Sharon Olds. After reading a bit of her works, I see the resemblance.
Tec....because I can
I've changed the lingering "I" in a rough edit. I will have to live with it a while. Your point is taken, but I am still unsure if I agree with it. Did I mention I am terribly stubborn?
Chris...Thanks for the catch on fruit's. I agree with you on "draw a line".
I wasn't familiar with Sharon Olds. After reading a bit of her works, I see the resemblance.
Tec....because I can
I've changed the lingering "I" in a rough edit. I will have to live with it a while. Your point is taken, but I am still unsure if I agree with it. Did I mention I am terribly stubborn?
Chris...Thanks for the catch on fruit's. I agree with you on "draw a line".
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