06-18-2015, 12:40 AM
Thanks Mark. Made some changes. First problem was the title. Probably should have been "balance", but I felt the piece was too short to use it in the title and the body. I'm not 100% convinced it would sound as much like a riddle had we not had the riddle thread active so recently. I understand it's a little tough to piece together - the speaker is not at his best.
