Time's Dance

Time's Dance

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06-16-2015, 06:46 PM

Nice idea on the last two lines, not sure about "past, present, future", seems kind of redundant. I could be wrong though...thanks for sharing. Smile

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Time's Dance - by Rederex - 06-16-2015, 05:08 PM

RE: Time's Dance - by Merrikay - 06-16-2015, 06:46 PM

RE: Time's Dance - by Rederex - 06-16-2015, 07:02 PM

RE: Time's Dance - by Merrikay - 06-16-2015, 07:17 PM

RE: Time's Dance - by Rederex - 06-16-2015, 07:50 PM

RE: Time's Dance - by ellajam - 06-16-2015, 08:59 PM

RE: Time's Dance - by Magpie - 06-19-2015, 01:03 PM

RE: Time's Dance - by Rederex - 06-21-2015, 01:04 AM

RE: Time's Dance - by milo - 06-24-2015, 09:45 AM

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