06-16-2015, 06:05 AM
Thanks Chris, I guess I must be learning.
You're right about having it as the title as well, I wasn't really happy with 'I am a Deer' as the title, it was a bit lazy on my part. 'Abracadabra' works as the title even though it's the last line because the when used the second time it has a totally different meaning as to when you read it in the title.
Thanks for your input, I'm really surprised and pleased with the outcome.
Much appreciated,
Mark
You're right about having it as the title as well, I wasn't really happy with 'I am a Deer' as the title, it was a bit lazy on my part. 'Abracadabra' works as the title even though it's the last line because the when used the second time it has a totally different meaning as to when you read it in the title.
Thanks for your input, I'm really surprised and pleased with the outcome.
Much appreciated,
Mark
wae aye man ye radgie
