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How do you paint a picture with words? Revision

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06-16-2015, 03:06 AM

Tried to improve it, might be worse!XD

How do you paint a picture with words?
Syllables sloping, groping emotion, force a rhyme...
I want to know, I want to flow,
Eluding my grasp in glossy dark caverns.
Is poetry a thought, an emotion?
Floating through annals of poets devotion,
If a word is a thought, why can't it be me
Expressing, attesting for you to see.
There's a rhyme does it flow, does it go
In my lyrical garden, plucking the rose?

I relish writing bad poems, if it means someday I'll write a good one.

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How do you paint a picture with words? Revision - by Merrikay - 06-13-2015, 02:51 AM

RE: I don't even know what this is.. - by Leanne - 06-13-2015, 05:48 AM

RE: I don't even know what this is.. - by Merrikay - 06-13-2015, 09:35 AM

RE: I don't even know what this is.. - by Forestdawn - 06-14-2015, 05:25 AM

RE: I don't even know what this is.. - by Forestdawn - 06-13-2015, 08:33 AM

RE: I don't even know what this is.. - by billy - 06-15-2015, 09:16 AM

RE: I don't even know what this is.. - by Merrikay - 06-15-2015, 09:46 AM

RE: I don't even know what this is.. - by billy - 06-15-2015, 09:56 AM

RE: I don't even know what this is.. - by Todd - 06-16-2015, 03:58 AM

RE: How do you paint a picture with words? Revision - by Merrikay - 06-16-2015, 04:11 AM

RE: How do you paint a picture with words? Revision - by Merrikay - 06-17-2015, 01:06 AM

RE: How do you paint a picture with words? Revision - by billy - 06-17-2015, 12:17 PM

RE: How do you paint a picture with words? Revision - by Merrikay - 06-17-2015, 11:06 PM

RE: How do you paint a picture with words? Revision - by billy - 06-18-2015, 10:37 AM

RE: How do you paint a picture with words? Revision - by Merrikay - 06-18-2015, 04:48 AM

RE: How do you paint a picture with words? Revision - by Merrikay - 06-19-2015, 01:26 AM

RE: How do you paint a picture with words? Revision - by Mark A Becker - 06-25-2015, 03:07 AM

RE: How do you paint a picture with words? Revision - by Merrikay - 06-25-2015, 07:52 AM

RE: How do you paint a picture with words? Revision - by Merrikay - 12-13-2016, 11:38 PM

RE: How do you paint a picture with words? Revision - by Hkrodgers - 01-05-2017, 03:18 PM

How do you paint a picture with words? Revision - by Merrikay - 06-16-2015, 03:06 AM

RE: How do you paint a picture with words? Revision - by ChristopherSea - 06-16-2015, 03:46 AM

RE: How do you paint a picture with words? Revision - by Merrikay - 06-16-2015, 03:53 AM

RE: How do you paint a picture with words? Revision - by ellajam - 06-16-2015, 04:02 AM

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