Abracadabra (Original title - I am a Deer)

[Magpie]

Thanks Chris excellent suggestions.

I've made an edit and left out 'Silently, gracefully' and that works a lot better cheers for that one. I agree with you also about the last line needing to connect with the second 'I practise magic' and I've went for something that I suppose could be a risk and that is 'Abracadabra'. I know it's a cliche but I was thinking that because it's not used in a normal way and together with the twist that it may avoid being seen as a cliche. What do you think? I also feel as though it adds a slight sinister feel to and I kind of like that, but if it is too evidently cliche I'll have to rethink it.

Thanks for reading and the suggestions,

Mark