I'm not you
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Yes, just try to keep capitalisation consistent. Or you could go the e e cummings road and avoid capitals at all. But I found this poem intriguing, especially the bit about 'bubbles' walls', which I did not fully understand. But, then again, poetry is supposed to make you think, isn't it? Keep o writing.
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I'm not you - by poppoetry - 06-13-2015, 11:44 PM
RE: I'm not you - by Julia.rose.q - 06-14-2015, 12:02 AM
RE: I'm not you - by poppoetry - 06-14-2015, 12:46 AM
RE: I'm not you - by Gaslampfantasy - 06-15-2015, 10:41 PM
RE: I'm not you - by Merrikay - 06-16-2015, 07:10 PM



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