Mammals
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Thanks for reading guys. I wrote this during Napm when I was trying to experiment with some forms. It wasn't the one I posted that day but I like at least some of this. It gets a little closer to my comfort zone of more free verse when the line breaks and rhymes are less traditional. The poem itself is a little weak but I learned something writing it. Thanks for the input. Always appreciated.
Paul the Sonnetist.
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Mammals - by Tiger the Lion - 06-13-2015, 09:16 AM
RE: Mammals - by Brownlie - 06-14-2015, 02:19 PM
RE: Mammals - by ellajam - 06-14-2015, 09:11 PM
RE: Mammals - by Tiger the Lion - 06-15-2015, 01:45 AM
RE: Mammals - by hopefularahant - 06-20-2015, 11:38 AM



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