06-15-2015, 01:45 AM
Thanks for reading guys. I wrote this during Napm when I was trying to experiment with some forms. It wasn't the one I posted that day but I like at least some of this. It gets a little closer to my comfort zone of more free verse when the line breaks and rhymes are less traditional. The poem itself is a little weak but I learned something writing it. Thanks for the input. Always appreciated.
Paul the Sonnetist.
Paul the Sonnetist.
