Hollow.
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I thought it was about death for the first two stanzas, but I suppose a relationship break-up is a form of death, or at least it feels that way.
I felt the tone went from pain to pettiness in the final two stanzas, but again, these are the emotions we go through in these situations.
However, I do love the final line. There's nothing better than a well put "fuck you" in a love/hate poem. Smile
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Hollow. - by Nyxx - 06-11-2015, 06:32 AM
RE: Hollow. - by Todd - 06-11-2015, 07:03 AM
RE: Hollow. - by Nyxx - 06-11-2015, 10:24 AM
RE: Hollow. - by Julia.rose.q - 06-13-2015, 05:43 AM
RE: Hollow. - by Icon Zero - 06-14-2015, 11:19 AM
RE: Hollow. - by billy - 06-14-2015, 12:21 PM
RE: Hollow. - by Gaslampfantasy - 06-15-2015, 10:31 PM
RE: Hollow. - by alsayn - 07-04-2015, 06:04 PM



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