06-14-2015, 08:14 AM
Written in Iambic pentameter (more or less) An Elizabethan Sonnet
I concur with ella on all the feet of trochee you have, which she pointed out. Although it would be a hard case to make with the people I grew up with. The main troubling point is less in the meter and more in the line composition. Most of the lines tend to read a little stiffly due to syntactical and grammatical aberrations. To say it simply, the lines did not read as though natural.
Dale
I concur with ella on all the feet of trochee you have, which she pointed out. Although it would be a hard case to make with the people I grew up with. The main troubling point is less in the meter and more in the line composition. Most of the lines tend to read a little stiffly due to syntactical and grammatical aberrations. To say it simply, the lines did not read as though natural.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.