06-14-2015, 07:56 AM
Sorry, I know this is in fun, but the line "so dark and so mystique." bothers me. Not only was mystique used as the title, but you are using "mystique" a noun, when you probably need an adjective, like mysterious. I think maybe "piqued" instead of "peak".
Sorry,
Dale
Sorry,
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.