06-14-2015, 01:50 AM
(06-14-2015, 01:33 AM)ambrosial revelation Wrote: I am a deer.Hey Mark. I really love this one. Simple with a twist. Two small things...
If you want to see cows and horses
go to a field, they will greet you.
I however, will vanish when you blink.
Silently, gracefully,
I practice magic.
You are privileged to witness it.
I am a deer.
I command acres
of glorious Highland wilderness,
though sometimes at night I prefer tarmac.
I seem to appear out of thin air,
I practice magic.
Neither of us will survive.
I think it is "practise" in this usage.
And you might also consider a semicolon after "thin air".
Fun read.
Paul
